Tuesday, October 30, 2007

I Miss You A LOT........


Was it Crying or Just Tears Rolling Down???

Can crying really be so comfortable?
When I laid my face against ur shoulders...
Or hugged you tight for life..
With my eyes filled with tears....

I've closed down my eyes
Never intending to show u tear dropping
But they overflowed somehow....
Tried for life but cudn't keep the vow...

I know u felt my hot tears
For u pulled me back softly all of a sudden...
And then I saw despite my blurred vision
Tears shinning in ur eyes too....

All the pain was gone and it was solace
Clinging to each other.........
With our tears merrying with each other...
Somehow I cudn't help but to remember...........

Yes my dear,
This was how my tears comfort me...
When I have got u after a long time
And in my joy,I felt like crying....

1 comment:

Poulomi said...

crying is not always tears rolling down...but tears rolling dwn is he easiest expression of crying...

very vivid r u...amazing...
the "YOU" of ur poem name "i miss u a lot" deserves a praise for makng u write so well........

i wish it was me...lolzz :)
jokes apart... let ur tears roll dwn wen they have to,u'll nevr knw how the pain will vanish then...
and m always thr...

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